Distant Shore, 30 x 40, oil on canvas, L. Daniel © 2020
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This was another large-scale "make-over" project... As I shared a few weeks ago, changes can can be scary, particularly when I have worked long and hard on a distinctly large piece. My fearful voice whispers, "leave well enough alone", while my bold voice cheers and cajoles, "don't be a wimp, go for it!!"
BEFORE
AFTER
CHANGES:
Problem 1 - The scene lacked the sense of depth I was going for.
Fix 1 - Enlarged the foreground clouds. This not only brought them closer (which helped push back the distant shore), it also provided the "reason" for such extensive beach shadows.
Fix 2 - Defined the distant figures to help reinforce the sense of scale.
Problem 2 - The sky lacked movement and drama.
Fix 1 - Gave the clouds more action by breaking up the edges.
Fix 2 - Added more layers of stratus clouds in the distance to enhance sense of movement.
OBSERVATIONS:
So what was I going for?? I wanted to capture that expansive, immenseness of nature's elements. I think I got a little closer in the second version, but it's a never ending pursuit. Creation is wonderfully grand.
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